Duel Academy Cyber Reality

Episode #1:



Craig - 1600 life points
Person - 3000 life points

[Craig] Dang it, his monster is too strong... OKay here i go... Draw... Yes just what i needed, i summon La Vita Crab and i'll have it attack...

[person] My Vorse Raider has more attack than your stinking car kid... Hey wait why are you smiling...

[Craig] You see when La Vita Crab attacks it gains a 300 point boost, making his attack 2000, 100 more than your Vorce Raider...

Craig - 1600 life points
Person - 2900 life points

[Craig] Your move...

[Person] Draw... OKay I'm going to end this quick... but for now i'll play Dragon Dwelling in Cave in deffence mode...

[Craig] Now i sacrifice my La Vita Crab for MAX Revenge...

[Person] There has to be a catch that thing has 1900 ATK and 6 stars...

[Craig] That's right you guessed it... i'll have MAX Revenge attack... you see when MAX Revenge attacks it gains 100 attack points for each machine type monster in my graveyard... and i count 5... So MAX Revenge's ATK is now 2400...

[Person] No my dragon...

[Craig] it's your turn... and might be your last

[Person] D... Dra... Draw... no i have no cards that i can play... I... I... I end my turn...

[Craig] Now your going to lose... Now i summon Tornado Shark in attack mode... and now I attack you directly with MAX Revenge and Tornado Shark...

Craig - 1600 life points
Person - 0 life points


*As Craig is waliking away from his opponent a Tall man (no not tallman95) walks up to him*

[Tall man] Kid you have amazing dueling skills

[Craig] Thanks...

[Tall man] I think you would really love to go to this new duel summer camp... If you do here is the adress...

[Craig] Thanks?

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Months Later... The First Day of Summer... On Board an airplane

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[Craig] Well i guess this is my seat... Hello... My name is Craig...

[Johny] Ello... the names Johny... Johny Soul... and this here is my friend Dominic...

[Dominic] PLeasure to meet ya... were ya heading?

[Craig] I'm going to the Duel Academy Cyber Reality...

[Dominic] That's exactly were we're going...


To Be Continued...

No one has any comments... I'm heart broken...

Don't be!

I think this is good!

Can't wait for numba 2

Whens nuba 2 coming out?

bimbpo wrote:Whens nuba 2 coming out?

Not for awhile... mabye not until my holiday break... i have alot of school work lately...

Ok I'll wait

I'm annoyed that you use ... to end almost every sentence in the story. That makes it feel like they speak extremely slow, like zombies or something. Other than that, it was generally nice.